#梁师亦友聊英语# 2027年高考英语书面表达高优先级训练题(三 )练一道,会一类:邀请信——邀请外教参加中国书法体验课

梁师亦友聊英语｜作文抢分计划③：邀请信怎么写才礼貌又高分？

同学们好，前两期我们练了“活动报道”，这一期换体裁——邀请信。题目变了，但“中国传统文化”这条主线没变。邀请信要拿分，关键不是写长，而是写全、写准、写得礼貌。

【实践版】

【题典在线】

假定你是李津，你校将举办中国书法体验课。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封邀请信，内容包括：

1. 活动时间与地点；

2. 活动内容；

3. 期待回复。

注意：词数120左右；可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。

【审题导航】

体裁：邀请信

人称：第一人称 I / we

时态：一般将来时为主

格式：称呼、正文、结尾署名

四要素：邀请对象、时间地点、活动内容、期待回复

语气：礼貌、真诚、简洁

【范文赏析1】稳健规范版（约120词）

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to invite you to our Chinese calligraphy experience class. It will be held in the school art room from 3:00 to 5:00 next Friday afternoon.

During the class, a calligraphy teacher will give a brief lecture on the history of Chinese calligraphy and demonstrate basic skills. You will also have a chance to try writing some Chinese characters with a brush. It will be a meaningful and enjoyable experience. I believe it will help you feel the charm of traditional Chinese culture and promote cultural exchange between us.

I would be grateful if you could join us. Please let me know if you are available. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Jin

梁师批注：这篇稳在哪里？

1. 格式规范：称呼、正文、结尾署名齐全。

2. 要点完整：时间地点、活动内容、期待回复都有。

3. 语气礼貌：I am writing to invite... / I would be grateful if... / Looking forward to your reply.

4. 主题扣得准：feel the charm of traditional Chinese culture / promote cultural exchange.

【范文赏析2】高分进阶版（约120词）

Dear Mr. Smith,

On behalf of our school, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese calligraphy workshop scheduled for next Friday afternoon.

The class will take place in the school art room from 3:00 to 5:00. A calligraphy teacher will first introduce the history and basic techniques of Chinese calligraphy, and then demonstrate how to write with a brush. After that, you will have the opportunity to try writing a Chinese character yourself. It would be a wonderful chance to appreciate the charm of traditional Chinese culture and strengthen cultural exchange.

I hope you can join us. I would appreciate it if you could confirm your availability at your earliest convenience. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Jin

梁师批注：这篇高在哪里？

1. 开头更正式：On behalf of our school...

2. 时间表达更自然：scheduled for next Friday afternoon

3. 活动流程更清楚：first... and then... After that...

4. 高级句式：It would be a wonderful chance to... / I would appreciate it if you could...

5. 礼貌升级：confirm your availability at your earliest convenience

【梁师点拨】

1. 邀请信万能四步

开头：I am writing to invite you to...

时间地点：It will be held in... from... to... next...

活动内容：During the class, ... will first... Then you will have a chance to...

期待回复：I would appreciate it if you could... Looking forward to your reply.

2. 高频可复用表达

invite sb. to... 邀请某人参加……

be scheduled for... 定于……

take place 举行

give a brief lecture on... 就……作简短讲座

demonstrate basic skills 展示基本技艺

try writing with a brush 尝试用毛笔书写

appreciate the charm of... 领略……的魅力

promote / strengthen cultural exchange 促进/加强文化交流

confirm your availability 确认您是否有空

at your earliest convenience 尽早

3. 背诵清单

建议背这5句：

I am writing to invite you to our Chinese calligraphy experience class.

It will be held in the school art room from 3:00 to 5:00 next Friday afternoon.

You will also have a chance to try writing some Chinese characters with a brush.

I believe it will help you feel the charm of traditional Chinese culture.

I would appreciate it if you could confirm your availability at your earliest convenience.

4. 迁移训练

把“中国书法体验课”换成以下活动，邀请信框架照样用：

中国剪纸体验课

中国茶艺体验课

中国国画体验课

校园传统文化节

天津杨柳青年画展

【导学案】

一、命题分析

“邀请外教参加中国书法体验课”属于天津卷“用英语讲好中国故事”主线下的高频应用文。它具备四个高优先级特征：

方向契合：中国传统文化＋跨文化交流。

题型典型：邀请信格式稳定，四要素清晰。

迁移性强：可迁移到剪纸、茶艺、国画、文化节、展览。

语言可复用：invite、schedule、demonstrate、try one’s hand、appreciate、confirm availability 等表达可反复使用。

命题概率判断：按主题方向看，命中“传统文化/跨文化交流”主线概率较高；按具体题面看，中等偏高。训练价值大于押题价值。

二、评分关注点

格式：称呼、正文、结尾署名是否完整。

要点：时间地点、活动内容、期待回复是否齐全。

语气：是否礼貌、得体，符合邀请信语域。

语言：时态、搭配、句式是否准确多样。

篇章：连接词是否自然，活动流程是否清楚。

主题：是否点出书法体验的文化意义。

三、实施建议

审题圈四要素：对象、时间地点、内容、回复。

词汇头脑风暴：calligraphy, brush, demonstrate, experience, cultural exchange。

搭建四步框架：邀请—安排—内容—期待。

句型升级：把 I hope you can come 升级为 I would appreciate it if you could...

限时写作：15—20分钟完成120词左右。

互评润色：重点查格式、时态、礼貌语气、要点。

背诵仿写：背5句，仿写“剪纸体验课”邀请信。

四、注意要点

时态是否以一般将来时为主。

是否写出具体时间地点，避免只写 next week。

活动内容是否有流程：讲座—演示—体验。

结尾是否有期待回复。

语气是否礼貌，避免命令式表达。

是否点出文化意义，避免只写活动安排。

五、常见错误提醒

格式错误：缺少称呼或署名。

搭配错误：look forward to your reply，不写 look forward to hear。

介词错误：be held in the art room，不写 be held at the art room（若强调地点可用 at the school art room，但 in the room 更稳）。

时态错误：活动将举行，主体用一般将来时。

句式错误：I would appreciate it if you could...，不要漏掉 it。

拼写错误：calligraphy 拼写；Chinese 首字母大写。

语气生硬：Please come. 可改为 I would be grateful if you could join us.

【背诵版】

一、背诵金句

1. I am writing to invite you to our Chinese calligraphy experience class.

我写信邀请您参加我们的中国书法体验课。

2. It will be held in the school art room from 3:00 to 5:00 next Friday afternoon.

活动将于下周五下午3点到5点在学校美术教室举行。

3. A calligraphy teacher will give a brief lecture on the history of Chinese calligraphy and demonstrate basic skills.

书法老师将简要介绍中国书法历史并展示基本技艺。

4. You will also have a chance to try writing some Chinese characters with a brush.

您也将有机会尝试用毛笔写汉字。

5. It will help you feel the charm of traditional Chinese culture.

这将帮助您感受中国传统文化的魅力。

6. It will promote cultural exchange between us.

这将促进我们之间的文化交流。

7. I would be grateful if you could join us.

如果您能参加，我将不胜感激。

8. I would appreciate it if you could confirm your availability at your earliest convenience.

如果您能尽早确认是否有空，我将不胜感激。

9. Please let me know if you are available.

请告诉我您是否有空。

10. Looking forward to your reply.

期待您的回复。

二、翻译练习

1. 我写信邀请您参加我校的中国书法体验课。

2. 活动将于下周五下午3点到5点在学校美术教室举行。

3. 您将有机会尝试用毛笔写汉字。

4. 这将帮助您感受中国传统文化的魅力。

5. 如果您能尽早确认是否有空，我将不胜感激。

参考译文：

1. I am writing to invite you to our Chinese calligraphy experience class.

2. It will be held in the school art room from 3:00 to 5:00 next Friday afternoon.

3. You will have a chance to try writing Chinese characters with a brush.

4. It will help you feel the charm of traditional Chinese culture.

5. I would appreciate it if you could confirm your availability at your earliest convenience.