第一节 (满分15分)
(考生回忆版) 以外教将班级英语作文集结成册为情境,要求学生写出“建议配图”和“自荐承担画图工作”等内容,渗透语言表达与艺术创作相结合的理念。。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
命题立意
1. 育人导向:五育融合,渗透美育素养
试题将英语语言运用与美术创作相结合,落实“五育融合”要求,鼓励考生发挥个人特长、主动担当、乐于助人,培养合作意识与审美情趣。
2. 交际情境:回归实用文体,聚焦真实交际
延续高考经典邮件交际场景,属于日常人际沟通类应用文,要求语气礼貌得体、信息传递清晰,贴合中外日常邮件交流习惯,重点考查语言交际实用性。
3. 命题特点:稳中求新,弱化机械模板
保留传统“李华”书信考查形式,但弱化刻板模板套用。要求考生细化内容、自然衔接两大写作要点,结合语境补充细节,实现 “形式合规、内容鲜活”。
学科素养与思维考查
1. 语言能力
严格遵循英文邮件规范格式(称呼、正文、结束语、署名);表达上做到提建议委婉有礼、自我推荐自信真诚,用词地道、语句简洁流畅。
2. 文化意识
融合中外交际礼仪:既体现中华民族谦逊友善、热心助人的传统素养,又遵循英文邮件简洁、正式、礼貌的表达规范,做到跨文化交际得体自然。
3. 思维品质
逻辑思维:行文逻辑固定且清晰:问候寒暄 → 提出配图建议 + 说明配图优势 → 自荐绘图 + 阐述个人优势 → 表达期待与感谢,要点完整、过渡自然。
创新思维:可自主细化细节,如图解类型(卡通插画、场景配图、简笔画等);自荐部分可结合绘画特长、想象力、责任心、空余时间等角度丰富内容。
写作结构1. 开头:问候 + 说明来信目的
2. 主体:
① 建议配图(理由:增强可读性、吸引读者、让作文更生动);
② 自荐(理由:擅长绘画、了解作文内容、愿意负责)
3. 结尾:表达期待 + 祝福
满分范文
Dear Kate,
I'm excited to hear that you are planning to compile our English compositions into a book. I think it would be a great idea to add illustrations to it. Pictures related to the topics of the essays can make the book more attractive and help readers better understand the content. Besides, colorful illustrations will make the collection more lively and enjoyable to read.
I'd also like to volunteer for the drawing work. Drawing is one of my hobbies, and I have taken part in designing posters and school publications before. If given the chance, I will do my best to create suitable illustrations for the book.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节 (满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As far as I can remember, I’ve always been a night owl. Even in middle school, I would stay up very late. I would feel completely at ease doing my homework in bed, with light music on. I found comfort in keeping myself awake when everyone else had gone to bed, and I loved the silence of the night. My parents urged me to get out of this so-called unhealthy habit, but their repeated requests fell on deaf ears.
Fast forward to my first year of college. I still loved the night and would stay up until unruly hours for no apparent reason: chatting online and watching videos. When I finally started to study, I would race through the assigned work, often well past midnight. My roommate would tell me to go to bed and get up early the following morning to do it instead. Get up early to do my homework? No way! I would never do that.
Then, one day last term, I did exactly that. Bent over my laptop while sitting on the bed in the corner of my room, I suddenly felt a pounding headache, and had to lie down. Unable to keep my eyes open, I decided I had no choice but to finish my homework the next morning. I woke up at 6 a.m. Hardly had I written half a page when I felt a sharp pain in my chest.
At the school clinic, a doctor, with a serious expression on his face, handed me a medical report. “You’re 20, but your heart is 40!” he said. A cold wave went through me. I realized that years of living as a late-night person had turned my heart into an overworked engine.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Struck by the doctor’s warning, I knew I had to make a change.
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Slowly but surely, my efforts to adjust to the new routine paid off.
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故事梗概:主人公是个夜猫子,谁劝也不管用,后期弯了下腰突然脑袋疼心脏也疼,去医院后发现心脏出了问题,她要开始改变自己的生活习惯。
满分范文1
Struck by the doctor’s warning, I knew I had to make a change. That very night, I initiated my battle against my deep-rooted habits. I forcibly switched off my laptop and phone at 10 p.m., placing them completely out of reach. However, my rebellious biological clock refused to cooperate. I tossed and turned in the darkness, the silence of the room amplifying my anxiety. The urge to grab my phone and drown in videos was overwhelmingly tempting. Just as my willpower was about to crumble, the doctor's stern voice and that terrifying sharp pain in my chest echoed in my mind, anchoring me back to reality. I squeezed my eyes shut, practicing deep breathing until exhaustion finally claimed me. Slowly but surely, my efforts to adjust to the new routine paid off. The mornings, which used to be my greatest enemy, gradually transformed into a welcoming friend. Instead of racing through assignments with a foggy brain at midnight, I found myself tackling them with a clear and focused mind in the golden sunlight. Not only did the heavy burden on my chest vanish, but an unprecedented sense of vitality also flowed through my veins. When I proudly showed my parents my improved medical report during the holiday, their relieved smiles were my best reward. I finally realized that true comfort isn't found in the unruly hours of the night, but in the vibrant rhythm of a disciplined life.
满分范文2
Struck by the doctor’s warning, I knew I had to make a change. The transition, however, was anything but easy. Knowing my own weak willpower, I swallowed my pride and turned to my roommate—the early bird I once mocked—for assistance. "Please, drag me out of bed when your alarm goes off," I pleaded. The first few days were pure torture. At 10:30 p.m., my roommate would ruthlessly confiscate my electronic devices. When her alarm rang at 6:30 a.m., I felt like a zombie being forcibly pulled from the grave. I grumbled and groaned, my body aching for just five more minutes of sleep, but she wouldn't compromise. Through gritted teeth, I dragged myself to the library, forcing my sleepy brain to function. Slowly but surely, my efforts to adjust to the new routine paid off. As weeks went by, the "zombie" mornings became less painful, and eventually, I found myself waking up naturally before the alarm even rang. The quiet mornings in the library offered a different kind of peace—one that was productive and energizing, rather than isolating and exhausting. My heart no longer protested with sharp pains; instead, it beat with the steady rhythm of a vigorous 20-year-old. Looking back at the exhausted, night-owl version of myself, I felt a wave of gratitude for that terrifying medical report. It didn't just save my overworked heart; it awakened me to a brighter, healthier way of living.