考研英语真题长难句攻坚计划|Day94
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【长难句每日打卡】day 94

2022-2-ReadingPartA-T1-2-1
文章主题:《农场主将可持续鸡蛋视为蛋品行业的下一个风口》
These eggs, which are making their debut now on shelves for as much as $8 a dozen, are still labeled organic and animal-friendly, but they’re also from birds that live on farms using regenerative agriculture — special techniques to cultivate rich soils that can trap green-house gases.
词汇:
1.make one's debut 首次亮相、首次公开、首次推出、首次登场(人|物)
2.label n.标签 v.贴标签于
3.organic adj.有机的
4.bird n.禽类
5.regenerative adj.再生的
6.cultivate v培育、培养
7.trap v.用陷阱捕捉;留住,使保留;使受限制|不能动弹
8.dozen n.一打、十二个


【Step 1】找谓语
These eggs, which are making their debut now on shelves for as much as $8 a dozen, are still labeled organic and animal-friendly, but they’re also from birds that live on farms using regenerative agriculture — special techniques to cultivate rich soils that can trap green-house gases.
·动词 are making 时态:现在进行时
·动词 are labeled 语态:被动语态+时态:一般现在时
·动词 are 时态:一般现在时
·动词 live 时态:一般现在时
·动词 can trap 情态
【Step 2】断句
These eggs, [which are making their debut now on shelves for as much as $8 a dozen], are still labeled organic and animal-friendly, but they’re also from birds [that live on farms using regenerative agriculture — special techniques to cultivate rich soils <that can trap green-house gases>].
解析:本句是由but连接的两个转折关系的并列句:在并列句1中包含1个which引导的非限制性定语从句<有逗号>;在并列句2中包含2个that引导定语从句。
which引导的非限制性定语从句:
These eggs, [which are making their debut now on shelves for as much as $8 a dozen]
判断方法:1.位置:在名词|代词后;2.功能:which指代these eggs在从句中作谓语动词are making的主语。
that引导的定语从句1:
birds [that live on farms using regenerative agriculture — special techniques to cultivate rich soils <...>]
判断方法:1.位置:在名词|代词后;2.结构:从句不完整<从句谓语动词live缺主语,即that指代birds在从句中作live的主语。
that引导的定语从句2:
rich soils <that can trap green-house gases>
判断方法:1.位置:在名词|代词后;2.结构:从句不完整<从句谓语动词can trap缺主语,即that指代rich soils在从句中作can trap的主语>。
重点成分标注:
主语:在句首|谓语前
宾语:在动词|介词后
表语:在系动词后
主语:蓝色;谓语:红色;表语:绿色;宾语:紫色;宾补:深蓝
并列句1+2
These eggs, [...], are still labeled organic and animal-friendly, but they’re also from birds.
which引导的非限制性定语从句:
[which are making their debut now on shelves for as much as $8 a dozen]
其中,
1.now——副词作时间状语,表示“首次亮相”的时间;
2.on shelves——介宾结构作地点状语,表示“首次亮相”的地点
3.for as much as $8 a dozen——介宾结构作状语,说明“首次亮相”的价格。
that引导的定语从句1:
[that live on farms using regenerative agriculture — special techniques to cultivate rich soils <...>]
其中,
1.on farms——介宾结构作地点状语,表示“live”的地点;
2.using regenerative agriculture——非谓语短语作后置定语修饰名词farms【判断方法:1.位置:在名词|代词后;2.代入翻译通顺即可,即译为“...的”<使用再生农业的农场>】
3.special techniques——利用单破折号连接,表示是对regenerative agriculture进行的解释补充说明,说明再生农业所运用的技术;
4.to cultivate rich soils——非谓语短语作后置定语修饰名词special techniques【判断方法:1.位置:在名词|代词后;2.代入翻译通顺即可,即译为“...的”<直译:培育富有土壤的特别技术>】
that引导的定语从句2:
<that can trap green-house gases>
【Step 3】翻译
These eggs, [which are making their debut now on shelves for as much as $8 a dozen], are still labeled organic and animal-friendly, but they’re also from birds [that live on farms using regenerative agriculture — special techniques to cultivate rich soils <that can trap green-house gases>].
并列句1
These eggs, [which are making their debut now on shelves\\ for as much as $8 a dozen], \\are still labeled organic and animal-friendly,
翻译:这些鸡蛋目前正在货架上首次亮相,售价为一打8美元,仍然被贴上“有机”和“动物友好型”标签,
改译:目前,这些鸡蛋首次亮相市场,售价为一打8美元,它们仍带有“有机”和“动物友好型”标签,
翻译解释:
1.非限制性定语从句通常采取后置译法,即单独成句+重复先行词——本句话中,非限制性定语从句和主句共享一个主语,所以直接顺译下来即可;
2.被动的翻译:根据“尽量不用‘被’字原则”,把“被贴上...标签”改为“带有...标签”;
3.on shelves——“在货架子上”意思就是已经进入市场开始售卖了。
并列句2
but they’re also from birds\\ [that live on farms using regenerative agriculture—special techniques to cultivate rich soils<that can trap green-house gases>].
翻译:但是它们也来自鸟,这些鸟生活在使用再生农业的农场里——培育可以留住温室气体的富有土壤的特别技术。
改译:但是这些鸡蛋也来自禽类,这些禽类生活在使用再生农业的农场里——培育可以捕获温室气体的肥沃土壤的专项技术。
翻译解释:
1.定语从句的翻译:1)birds that从句词数超过8个词,采取后置译法,即单独成句+重复先行词<禽类,这些禽类>;2)rich soils that从句词数小于等于8个词,采取前置译法,即译为“...的”;
2.they——根据上下文,指的是“eggs鸡蛋”;
3.birds——这里不能单纯地译为“鸟”,应该指的是会下蛋“禽类”;
4.trap green-house gases——trap有“留住,使保留;使受限制|不能动弹”之意,直译为“保留温室气体,让温室气体动弹不得”,实则就是环境或气候科学所讲的“捕获或吸收温室气体”;
5.rich soils——rich搭配soils,应译为“肥沃的”;
6.special techniques——special搭配techniques,通常指的是“专门的技术”。
【Step 4】整合译文
目前,这些鸡蛋首次亮相市场,售价为一打8美元,它们仍带有“有机”和“动物友好型”标签,但是这些鸡蛋也来自禽类,这些禽类生活在使用再生农业的农场里——培育可以捕获温室气体的肥沃土壤的专项技术。
【Step 5】润色译文
These eggs, [which are making their debut now on shelves for as much as $8 a dozen], are still labeled organic and animal-friendly, but they’re also from birds [that live on farms using regenerative agriculture — special techniques to cultivate rich soils <that can trap green-house gases>].
目前,这些鸡蛋首次亮相市场,售价为一打8美元,它们仍带有“有机”和“动物友好型”标签,但生产这类鸡蛋的禽类养殖农场还运用了再生农业技术——用于培育可捕获温室气体的肥沃土壤的专项技术。
翻译解释:
1.鸡蛋来自禽类,禽类来自农场,农场应用了再生农业——即生产这类鸡蛋的禽类养殖农场运用了再生农业技术——之所以这样调整,因为破折号后内容是对“再生农业”的解释说明,这样就可以让它俩挨在一起。
补充:regenerative agriculture即special techniques,因此翻译regenerative agriculture时增译“技术”——再生农业技术。


1.make one's debut 首次亮相、首次公开、首次推出、首次登场(人|物)
2.label n.标签 v.贴标签于
3.organic adj.有机的
4.bird n.禽类
5.regenerative adj.再生的
6.cultivate v培育、培养
7.trap v.用陷阱捕捉;留住,使保留;使受限制|不能动弹
8.dozen n.一打、十二个


环保类:
1.regenerative agriculture 再生农业
2.special techniques专项技术
3.trap green-house gases 捕获温室气体
4.organic and animal-friendly 有机和动物友好型的
5.rich soils肥沃土壤

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