机考真题小作文示范写作 | 静态柱组合图 两个专业学费 & 收入对比
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October 4, 2026
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The bar charts give information about the salaries and university fees of students from three universities in two spheres - Law and Business.
主体段分段方法1:一图一段
开头段
The bar charts compare the average salaries of graduates and the tuition fees paid by students studying Law and Business at three universities.
概述段
Overall, University B generally offered higher salaries for both majors compared with the other two institutions. In addition, students paid more for university fees than they subsequently earned in all cases except for Law at University A, where the two figures were identical.
思路要点：
- 整体来说university B两个专业的毕业生薪资都比其他两个学校高
- 学费基本都高于薪资，只有university A的学费和薪资持平
Body paragraph 1
Regarding Law, University B charged the highest tuition fees, at $60,000, and its graduates also received the highest average salary, at $40,000. Similarly, University C ranked second in terms of fees ($55,000), while its graduates earned approximately $38,000. By contrast, University A charged $40,000 in fees, exactly matching the average graduate salary.
思路要点：Law
- University B学费最高($60,000)，薪水也最高($40,000)
- University C类似，学费第二高($55,000)，但薪水仅为($38,000)
- 只有University A的薪水和学费持平，都是$40,000
Body paragraph 2
A similar pattern could be found in Business, where university fees exceeded graduate salaries at all three institutions. Students from both University B and C earned $40,000 after graduation, whereas the corresponding figure for fees in University C ($60,000) was significantly higher than that in University B ($50,000 ). University A recorded the lowest figures for both categories, with tuition fees of $40,000, compared with an average graduate salary of $30,000.
思路要点：Business
- Business呈现类似规律，工资都低于学费
- University B 和University C的平均薪水都是$40,000，但University C的学费($60,000)高于 University B($50,000)
- University A的学费、薪水都最低，学费为$40,000，明显超过薪水($30,000)
