2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习---冬日哨声+导学案

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Grandpa handed Toby a small whistle(哨子) carved out of thick animal bone. Its surface was worn smooth by years of use. "This is a winter whistle," Grandpa explained. "If you are ever lost in the woods when it snows blow this. The sound carries far across snow-covered ground. We will hear you and come find you."

　　Toby slipped it deep inside his winter-coat pocket, "I'm 12, and I no longer need to call for help!" To him, blowing the whistle would mean admitting he was not brave enough.

　　That weekend, Toby went snow-trekking (雪地徒步) in the nearby forest with his best friend Jax. But an argument broke out between them over a silly game. Toby stormed off in anger, leaving Jax behind. He told himself he did not need anyone's company. He would explore deeper into the woods alone to prove how tough he was.

　　But the sun began to set. Grey clouds rolled in unexpectedly. A bitter winter wind sprang up. Snow began to fall in thick, swirling flakes. The gentle afternoon snow quickly turned into a snowstorm. Visibility dropped sharply. Toby could no longer tell which path led back home. He was lost.

　　Cold bit through his gloves and his winter jacket. His cheeks and nose ached from the bitter wind. Panic rose inside his chest. He pulled his hands out of his gloves and fumbled(摸索) inside his coat pocket. His fingers closed around the hard shape of Grandpa's whistle. It was right there. But shame washed over him. He had run away after the fight. If he blew the whistle, Grandpa and Jax would know he had acted stupidly. They would laugh at him for getting lost. Pride held him back. He stuffed the whistle back into his pocket and told himself he could find the way home by himself.

　　He struggled forward through the heavy snow. The wind howled, blowing snow into his eyes. The temperature kept dropping. Still, the whistle stayed safely hidden in his pocket. As it was getting dark in the snowy woods, Toby felt close to passing out from the cold. He had to hide behind a large pine tree for shelter.

注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。　　

Inside his pocket, the bone whistle pressed against his hand.

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The sound of the whistle drew anxious Grandpa and Jax over.

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一、文本分析

1. 角色

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2. 视角

　　第＿＿＿人称

3. 时空线

　　Grandpa handed Toby a winter whistle---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- I went snow-trekking with Jax---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- A snowstorm came and Toby got lost---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- Toby refused to blow the whistle out of pride---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- Toby hid behind a large pine tree

4. 细节问答

　　What did Grandpa give Toby?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　What was the winter whistle used for?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　Why didn't Toby want to blow the whistle?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　What happened between Toby and Jax?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　Why did Toby refuse to use the whistle after getting lost?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　What did Toby do at last?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

5. 情节线

　　爷爷把骨制"冬日哨"交给托比，叮嘱他迷失时吹响呼救→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→托比负气独自深入雪林→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→暴风雪来袭，托比迷路→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→托比因自尊迟迟不肯吹哨→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→托比濒临昏厥，躲到大松树下→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→（续写）托比放下自尊吹响哨子→（续写）爷爷与Jax循声赶来，托比领悟求助之勇

6. 情感线

　　Toby: proud and confident→＿＿＿＿＿＿→angry and stubborn→＿＿＿＿＿＿→panicked and lost→＿＿＿＿＿＿→ashamed and torn→＿＿＿＿＿＿→desperate and faint→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）

7. 综合概括（中英各一句）

　　中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

8. 句式

　　宾语从句；无灵主语；状语从句；非谓语；并列句

　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿____________________________________________________________

9. 本文主题

　　温情成长类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

二.情节构造

Paragraph 1: Inside his pocket, the bone whistle pressed against his hand.

　　衔接句1——What did Toby do with the whistle? What made him finally blow it?

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Paragraph 2: The sound of the whistle drew anxious Grandpa and Jax over.

　　衔接句2——What happened when they came? What lesson did Toby learn?

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三. 段落续写框架

　　第一段：骨制哨子在他口袋里抵着他的手。

　　→①＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→②＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→③＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿；

　　第二段：哨声把焦急的爷爷和Jax引了过来。

　　→④＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑤＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑥＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿。

四. 段落续写

　　Inside his pocket, the bone whistle pressed against his hand.

　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　The sound of the whistle drew anxious Grandpa and Jax over.

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参考答案

一、文本分析

1. 角色

　　Toby（12岁、倔强要强、自尊心强，但知错能改、肯放下骄傲的少年）；Grandpa（慈爱细心、未雨绸缪、深谙孙辈心理的智慧老人）；Jax（Toby 最好的朋友，重情重义、主动前来寻友的伙伴）

2. 视角

　　第三人称

3. 时空线

　　Grandpa handed Toby a winter whistle--- Grandpa explained its use and Toby hid it in his pocket--- Toby went snow-trekking with Jax--- They quarreled over a silly game and Toby stormed off alone--- A snowstorm came and Toby got lost--- Toby struggled forward, refusing to blow the whistle out of pride--- Toby hid behind a large pine tree, close to passing out

4. 细节问答

　　What did Grandpa give Toby?：Grandpa gave Toby a small whistle carved out of thick animal bone.

　　What was the winter whistle used for?：If Toby got lost in the woods when it snowed, he could blow it; the sound carried far and Grandpa and Jax would come and find him.

　　Why didn't Toby want to blow the whistle?：He thought he was already 12 and brave enough; blowing the whistle would mean admitting he was not brave enough.

　　What happened between Toby and Jax?：They broke into an argument over a silly game, and Toby stormed off in anger, leaving Jax behind.

　　Why did Toby refuse to use the whistle after getting lost?：Pride and shame held him back — he was afraid Grandpa and Jax would laugh at him for acting stupidly and getting lost.

　　What did Toby do at last?：He struggled forward through the heavy snow until he felt close to passing out, then had to hide behind a large pine tree for shelter.

5. 情节线

　　爷爷把骨制"冬日哨"交给托比，叮嘱迷失时吹响呼救→爷爷嘱咐用途，托比却暗想自己已长大、吹哨就是认怂→托比与Jax因小事争吵，负气独自深入雪林→暴风雪突袭，托比迷路陷入困境→托比摸到哨子却因羞愧与自尊强忍不发→托比在风雪中挣扎、濒临昏厥，躲到大松树下避难→（续写）生死关头，托比放下自尊吹响哨子→（续写）爷爷与Jax循声赶来，托比领悟真正的勇敢在于懂得求助

6. 情感线

　　Toby: proud and confident→unwilling and stubborn→angry and reckless→panicked and lost→ashamed and torn→desperate and faint→（续写）determined yet relieved→（续写）ashamed yet grateful，明白勇敢的真义

7. 综合概括（中英各一句）

　　中文：12岁的托比因与好友Jax争吵后负气独行，在暴风雪中迷路；他因自尊与羞愧迟迟不肯吹响爷爷所赠的冬日哨，直到濒临昏厥才放下骄傲吹哨求救，最终被爷爷和Jax寻回，领悟到真正的勇敢是懂得求助而非一味逞强。

　　英文：After quarreling with his best friend Jax, the proud 12-year-old Toby got lost alone in a snowstorm. Refusing to blow Grandpa's winter whistle out of shame, he struggled until nearly passing out, then finally lowered his pride and blew it, learning that true bravery lies in asking for help.

8. 句式

　　状语从句：If you are ever lost in the woods when it snows, blow this.

　　宾语从句：He told himself he did not need anyone's company.

非谓语动词：Grandpa handed Toby a small whistle(哨子) carved out of thick animal bone.

并列句：He stuffed the whistle back into his pocket and told himself he could find the way home by himself.

无灵主语：Pride held him back. 

9. 本文主题

　　温情成长类：真正的勇敢不是逞强，而是在困境中懂得放下自尊、主动求助；家人的关爱与朋友的情谊，是风雪中照向我们的温暖之光。

二.情节构造

Paragraph 1: Inside his pocket, the bone whistle pressed against his hand.

　　衔接句1——What did Toby do with the whistle? What made him finally blow it?

　　At first Toby hesitated, torn between pride and survival; but as the storm worsened and he grew faint, he finally put down his pride, took out the whistle and blew it with all his might.

Paragraph 2: The sound of the whistle drew anxious Grandpa and Jax over.

　　衔接句2——What happened when they came? What lesson did Toby learn?

　　Grandpa and Jax rushed over and found Toby, hugging him warmly without any blame; Toby learned that asking for help is not weakness but the sign of true courage.

三. 段落续写框架

　　第一段：骨制哨子在他口袋里抵着他的手。

　　→①托比在自尊与求生之间反复挣扎，迟迟不敢吹哨→②随着风雪加剧、寒冷侵袭，他濒临昏厥，求生的渴望终于压倒骄傲→③他取出哨子，用尽全身力气吹响，清脆的哨声穿透茫茫风雪；

　　第二段：哨声把焦急的爷爷和Jax引了过来。

　　→④爷爷与Jax循声赶来，发现并紧紧拥抱托比，无人责备→⑤托比羞愧又感动，真诚道歉并感谢他们的关心→⑥托比领悟：真正的勇敢是懂得求助，爱与信任比逞强更重要。

四. 段落续写

　　Inside his pocket, the bone whistle pressed against his hand. Toby froze, his heart pounding hard. Grandpa's warm words echoed in his mind: "We will hear you and come find you." Yet the thought of admitting he was not brave enough tied his fingers into knots. The howling wind grew fiercer, and the biting cold crept deeper into his bones, making him shiver and his eyelids grow heavy. He knew he could not last much longer. A strong wave of fear and longing for home swept over him, melting away his shame. Taking a deep breath, he put the whistle to his lips and blew it with all his might. A clear, piercing sound rang out across the snow-covered woods.

　　The sound of the whistle drew anxious Grandpa and Jax over. Within moments, two familiar figures appeared through the swirling snow. "Toby! We're here!" Grandpa shouted, hurrying to his side and wrapping him tightly in his warm arms. Tears welled up in Toby's eyes as relief washed over him. "I'm sorry. I was so stupid," he sobbed. Jax patted his shoulder with a gentle smile: "It's okay. We're friends." Back home, safe and warm by the fireplace, Toby realized that blowing the whistle was not a sign of weakness but an act of true courage. Asking for help when in need made him stronger than ever. He held the whistle tightly, treasuring the love and friendship that had found him.