2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习----白鹭放归(The+Little+Egret)+导学案

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Photography has long been my favorite hobby and I'm always eager to record beautiful moments of nature with my camera.

　　One morning, I was walking slowly along the lake near my neighborhood, expecting to capture a good moment, when I heard a weak and painful cry coming from the thick grass by the bank. Curious and concerned, I walked closer and found a little white egret (白鹭) trapped in an abandoned boat. Its wing was badly hurt, and it was struggling helplessly, unable to escape. Out of pity, I tried every means to free it without causing further injury. Finally, I rescued the poor creature and took it home temporarily.

　　My mother works at a local animal hospital. She gave the egret simple and careful treatment immediately. Meanwhile, I used a large cardboard box to build a warm nest for it on the balcony. With good care, the egret gradually regained its strength, but recovered very slowly from the injury to its wing.

　　The egret's pure white feathers and elegant postures fascinated me deeply. Suddenly an idea occurred to me: If I could keep the rare and beautiful wild bird and take a series of exquisite (精美的) photos of it when it grew bigger, I could participate in the city's photography competition and definitely win the grand prize. The prize money was exactly enough to cover the cost of my long-awaited professional camera. However, staring at the egret's clear eyes and recalling how it struggled in pain before the rescue, I hesitated. Wild animals should belong in nature instead of being personal possessions. Finally, I firmly gave up this idea and decided to release it into the wild after it fully recovered.

　　One afternoon, I returned home after school as usual. Shockingly, the cardboard nest was empty and the window was wide open. Thinking the egret must have flown away alone but hadn't fully recovered from the injury, I felt a sharp sense of loss and worry.

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　Moments later, I received a call from my mother.

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　　A month later, my mother and I returned to the lake to set the egret free.

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一、文本分析

1. 角色

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2. 视角

　　第＿＿＿人称

3. 时空线

　　I was walking along the lake---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- I rescued the injured egret and took it home---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- My mother treated it and I built a nest for it---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- I gave up the idea of keeping it and decided to set it free---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- I found the nest empty and felt worried---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿---（续写）I received a call from my mother---（续写）We returned to the lake to set the egret free

4. 细节问答

　　What is the author's favorite hobby?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　Where was the egret trapped?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　What was wrong with the egret?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　Who treated the egret?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　What idea occurred to the author?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　Why did the author give up the idea?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

5. 情节线

　　喜欢摄影，渴望记录自然之美→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→在湖边听到白鹭的痛苦叫声，救起受伤白鹭带回家→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→妈妈为它治疗、我用纸箱搭窝，白鹭缓慢恢复→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→萌生留它拍照参赛获奖的念头，又因尊重生命而放弃、决定放归→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→放学回家发现纸箱空空、窗户大开，担心失落→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→（续写）接到妈妈电话→（续写）一个月后回到湖边放归白鹭

6. 情感线

　　I: eager and passionate→＿＿＿＿＿＿→sympathetic and determined→＿＿＿＿＿＿→warm and caring→＿＿＿＿＿＿→hesitant and conflicted→＿＿＿＿＿＿→firm and relieved→＿＿＿＿＿＿→lost and worried→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）

7. 综合概括（中英各一句）

　　中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

　　英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

8.句式（状语从句，宾语从句，非谓语动词，并列句，定语从句）

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9. 本文主题

　　温情成长类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

二.情节构造

Paragraph 1: Moments later, I received a call from my mother.

　　衔接句1——What did the mother say? Where was the egret?

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Paragraph 2: A month later, my mother and I returned to the lake to set the egret free.

　　衔接句2——How did they release it? What did the author learn?

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三. 段落续写框架

　　第一段：片刻后，我接到了妈妈的电话。

　　→①＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→②＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→③＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿；

　　第二段：一个月后，我和妈妈回到湖边放归白鹭。

　　→④＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑤＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑥＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿。

四. 段落续写

　　Moments later, I received a call from my mother.

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　　A month later, my mother and I returned to the lake to set the egret free.

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参考答案

一、文本分析

1. 角色

　　I（热爱摄影、善良有爱心、知错能改、懂得尊重生命的少年）；my mother（动物医院工作者，专业、细心、理解并支持我）；the egret（纯白美丽、受伤获救、渴望回归自然的野生动物）

2. 视角

　　第一人称

3. 时空线

　　I was walking along the lake--- I heard a weak cry and found the egret trapped--- I rescued the injured egret and took it home--- My mother treated it and I built a nest for it--- I gave up the idea of keeping it and decided to set it free--- I found the nest empty and felt worried---（续写）I received a call from my mother---（续写）We returned to the lake to set the egret free

4. 细节问答

　　What is the author's favorite hobby?：Photography, recording beautiful moments of nature with his camera.

　　Where was the egret trapped?：In an abandoned boat in the thick grass by the lake bank.

　　What was wrong with the egret?：Its wing was badly hurt and it was struggling helplessly, unable to escape.

　　Who treated the egret?：The author's mother, who works at a local animal hospital.

　　What idea occurred to the author?：To keep the egret, take exquisite photos of it, win the grand prize, and buy his long-awaited professional camera.

　　Why did the author give up the idea?：Because wild animals should belong in nature instead of being personal possessions; recalling its pain, he chose to respect life.

5. 情节线

　　喜欢摄影，渴望记录自然之美→在湖边听到白鹭的痛苦叫声，救起受伤白鹭带回家→妈妈为它治疗、我用纸箱搭窝，白鹭缓慢恢复→萌生留它拍照参赛获奖的念头，又因尊重生命而放弃、决定放归→放学回家发现纸箱空空、窗户大开，担心失落→（续写）接到妈妈电话→（续写）一个月后回到湖边放归白鹭

6. 情感线

　　I: eager and passionate→curious and concerned→sympathetic and determined→warm and caring→hesitant and conflicted→firm and relieved→lost and worried→（续写）anxious then relieved→（续写）reluctant yet happy，学会放手与尊重

7. 综合概括（中英各一句）

　　中文：热爱摄影的"我"救起一只受伤白鹭并悉心照料，一度想留它拍照参赛获奖以换专业相机，最终被生命的清澈眼眸打动、选择放归自然，领悟到真正的爱是尊重生命、懂得放手。

　　英文：Moved by his love for photography, the author rescued an injured egret and once dreamed of keeping it to win a photo contest; but seeing its clear eyes, he gave up the idea and decided to return it to nature, learning that true love means respecting life and letting go.

8. 句式

　　状语从句：When I returned home after school, I was shocked to find the cardboard nest empty.

　　宾语从句：I realized that wild animals should belong in nature instead of being personal possessions.

　　非谓语动词：Curious and concerned, I walked closer and found a little white egret trapped in an abandoned boat.

　　并列句：My mother works at a local animal hospital, and she gave the egret careful treatment immediately.

　　定语从句：I decided to release it into the wild, where it truly belonged.

9. 本文主题

　　温情成长类：尊重自然与生命，爱与拥有并非一回事；真正的爱是给生灵自由、让它回到属于它的天地，摄影的初衷也因此回归记录与欣赏本身。

二.情节构造

Paragraph 1: Moments later, I received a call from my mother.

　　衔接句1——What did the mother say? Where was the egret?

　　My mother told me she had seen the egret leave the nest, noticed its wound had reopened, and brought it to the hospital for treatment; my worry turned into relief, and I decided to wait until it fully recovered to set it free together.

Paragraph 2: A month later, my mother and I returned to the lake to set the egret free.

　　衔接句2——How did they release it? What did the author learn?

　　We gently let the fully recovered egret go at the lake; it circled overhead as if saying goodbye. Watching it fly away, the author learned that true love is letting go and that every creature belongs to nature.

三. 段落续写框架

　　第一段：片刻后，我接到了妈妈的电话。

　　→①妈妈告诉我她发现白鹭翅膀旧伤复发，已带它去医院救治→②我的心由担忧转为安心，也明白白鹭并非弃我而去→③我决定等它完全康复后，陪它一起回湖边放归；

　　第二段：一个月后，我和妈妈回到湖边放归白鹭。

　　→④白鹭痊愈，在我掌心试探着振翅→⑤我虽不舍，却仍坚定地松开手，让它飞向属于它的蓝天碧水→⑥望着它远去的身影，我领悟到爱是放手、生命属于自然。

四. 段落续写

　　Moments later, I received a call from my mother. "Honey, I found the egret on the balcony this afternoon. Its wound had reopened, so I've brought it to the hospital for treatment," she said gently. My worry melted into relief, and a warm feeling rose in my heart. Over the following days, I visited it whenever I could, watching it grow stronger day by day. Finally, the doctor said it had fully recovered and was ready to return to the wild. I felt both excited and a little sad, knowing our time together was coming to an end.

　　A month later, my mother and I returned to the lake to set the egret free. Holding the egret gently, I walked to the water's edge. It flapped its white wings as if saying goodbye. Though my heart was heavy with reluctance, I opened my hands and let it go. It soared into the blue sky, circling above the lake before flying far away. Standing there, I understood that true love is not possessing but letting go, and every creature belongs to nature. My camera recorded this beautiful moment — not for a prize, but as a memory of my respect for life.