2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习---NICU+的拥抱天使(The+Cuddler)+导学案
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Twice a week, 73-year-old Dave Whitlow walks into the neonatal intensive care unit (NICU) at Children's Hospital of Richmond with one goal: to comfort some of the hospital's weakest patients, one cuddle at a time.
For the past years, Whitlow has served as a volunteer cuddler, spending his Tuesdays and Thursdays holding premature and critically ill babies while they fight for their lives.
Every visit begins with careful preparation. Whitlow puts on a gown and gloves before entering the NICU, and he leaves his phone outside to avoid disturbance.
Although his role is built around sympathy, Whitlow approaches it with remarkable attention to detail. Before picking up each baby, he checks in with the nurses to understand the child's condition and any special care instructions.
Once a baby is resting against his chest, Whitlow keeps a close eye on the monitors. "I watch the monitors to see whether positionally there's anything to do to improve," he said.
Perhaps the sweetest part of his routine comes just before he returns each baby to their bed. Leaning in close, Whitlow quietly shares the same heartfelt wish every time. "Grow strong, grow smart, grow kind." These simple words reflect exactly what he hopes for every child he meets.
What began as a volunteer opportunity has become something much deeper. After about eight years of comforting babies, Whitlow says the NICU has become a family he never expected to find and one he can't imagine leaving.
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One Tuesday morning, a nurse told Dave that one tiny baby he had held for months was going home soon.
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Dave never expected that simple hugs could bring so much warmth to both the babies and himself.
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一、文本分析
1. 角色
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2. 视角
第＿＿＿人称
3. 时空线
Whitlow walks into the NICU twice a week---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- He prepares carefully before entering---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- He checks with the nurses and watches the monitors---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- He shares his heartfelt wish with each baby---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿--- The NICU has become his family---＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿---（续写）A nurse told Dave a tiny baby was going home soon---（续写）Dave reflected on the warmth that hugs bring
4. 细节问答
How often does Dave Whitlow visit the NICU?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
What does Whitlow do as a volunteer cuddler?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
What does he do before entering the NICU?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
How does he treat each baby?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
What wish does Whitlow share with each baby?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
What does the NICU mean to Whitlow now?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
5. 情节线
73岁的Whitlow每周两次走进NICU，用拥抱安慰最脆弱的婴儿→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→他以志愿者的身份每周二、四抱着早产和危重婴儿→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→每次探访他都细致准备、向护士了解孩子情况→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→抱着婴儿时他紧盯监视器、随时调整姿势→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→放回婴儿前他轻声送出"长大、变聪明、变善良"的祝愿→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→八年来NICU成了他意料之外的家人→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→（续写）护士告诉他那个抱了几个月的婴儿即将出院→（续写）Dave 感悟简单的拥抱带来的温暖
6. 情感线
Dave: devoted and caring→＿＿＿＿＿＿→patient and responsible→＿＿＿＿＿＿→gentle and attentive→＿＿＿＿＿＿→loving and hopeful→＿＿＿＿＿＿→attached and fulfilled→＿＿＿＿＿＿→（续写）moved and proud→（续写）touched and grateful
7. 综合概括（中英各一句）
中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
8.句式（状语从句，宾语从句，非谓语动词，并列句，定语从句）
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9. 本文主题
温情成长类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: One Tuesday morning, a nurse told Dave that one tiny baby he had held for months was going home soon.
衔接句1——How did Dave feel and react? What did he do for the baby one last time?
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Paragraph 2: Dave never expected that simple hugs could bring so much warmth to both the babies and himself.
衔接句2——What lesson did Dave learn? How would he continue?
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三. 段落续写框架
第一段：一个周二的早晨，护士告诉Dave他抱了好几个月的一个小婴儿即将出院。
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第二段：Dave从没想到简单的拥抱能给婴儿和他自己带来这么多温暖。
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四. 段落续写
One Tuesday morning, a nurse told Dave that one tiny baby he had held for months was going home soon.
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Dave never expected that simple hugs could bring so much warmth to both the babies and himself.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1. 角色
Dave Whitlow（73岁、善良慈爱、细致负责、长期坚持奉献的志愿者抱婴者）；the NICU nurses（专业、信任、与Whitlow默契协作的医护人员）；the babies（早产、危重却顽强求生的小生命）
2. 视角
第三人称
3. 时空线
Whitlow walks into the NICU twice a week--- He serves as a volunteer cuddler, holding premature babies--- He prepares carefully before entering--- He checks with the nurses and watches the monitors--- He shares his heartfelt wish with each baby--- The NICU has become his family---（续写）A nurse told Dave a tiny baby was going home soon---（续写）Dave reflected on the warmth that hugs bring
4. 细节问答
How often does Dave Whitlow visit the NICU?：Twice a week, on Tuesdays and Thursdays.
What does Whitlow do as a volunteer cuddler?：He holds premature and critically ill babies to comfort them while they fight for their lives.
What does he do before entering the NICU?：He puts on a gown and gloves, and leaves his phone outside.
How does he treat each baby?：He checks in with the nurses, watches the monitors, adjusts the baby's position, and shares a heartfelt wish before returning them to bed.
What wish does Whitlow share with each baby?："Grow strong, grow smart, grow kind."
What does the NICU mean to Whitlow now?：It has become a family he never expected to find and can't imagine leaving.
5. 情节线
73岁的Whitlow每周两次走进NICU，用拥抱安慰最脆弱的婴儿→他长期担任志愿者抱婴者，每周二、四抱着早产和危重婴儿→每次探访他都细致准备、向护士了解孩子情况→抱着婴儿时他紧盯监视器、随时调整姿势→放回婴儿前他轻声送出"长大、变聪明、变善良"的祝愿→八年来NICU成了他意料之外的家人→（续写）护士告诉他那个抱了几个月的婴儿即将出院→（续写）Dave 感悟简单的拥抱带来的温暖
6. 情感线
Dave: devoted and caring→patient and responsible→gentle and attentive→loving and hopeful→attached and fulfilled→（续写）moved and proud→（续写）touched and grateful
7. 综合概括（中英各一句）
中文：73岁的Dave Whitlow每周两次走进新生儿重症监护室，用细致的照料与温暖的拥抱陪伴早产和危重婴儿，八年来把NICU当成了自己的家；当他抱了几个月的孩子即将出院时，他更深刻地领悟到，简单的拥抱既是给孩子们的抚慰，也带给自己满满的温暖与价值感。
英文：73-year-old Dave Whitlow visits the NICU twice a week, gently holding premature and critically ill babies with great care, and has treated it as his family for eight years. When a tiny baby he had held for months was about to go home, he realized that simple hugs bring warmth not only to the babies but also to himself.
8. 句式
状语从句：Once a baby is resting against his chest, Whitlow keeps a close eye on the monitors.
宾语从句：Whitlow says the NICU has become a family he never expected to find.
非谓语动词：Leaning in close, Whitlow quietly shares the same heartfelt wish every time.
并列句：Whitlow puts on a gown and gloves before entering the NICU, and he leaves his phone outside.
定语从句：One tiny baby that he had held for months was going home soon.
9. 本文主题
温情成长类：真正的善良藏在细水长流的坚持里，付出爱与关怀的同时也收获温暖与归属；小小的拥抱可以托起希望，让彼此的生命都变得更加柔软而有光。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: One Tuesday morning, a nurse told Dave that one tiny baby he had held for months was going home soon.
衔接句1——How did Dave feel and react? What did he do for the baby one last time?
Dave was overjoyed yet a little reluctant; he held the baby gently for the last time, whispered his usual wish softly, and watched with teary eyes as the parents carried the healthy baby away.
Paragraph 2: Dave never expected that simple hugs could bring so much warmth to both the babies and himself.
衔接句2——What lesson did Dave learn? How would he continue?
Dave learned that love given freely returns in warmth and purpose; he decided to keep on cuddling more babies, feeling that the NICU was his true family and every hug mattered.
三. 段落续写框架
第一段：一个周二的早晨，护士告诉Dave他抱了好几个月的一个小婴儿即将出院。
→①Dave 既欣喜又有些不舍，心里百感交集→②他最后一次轻轻抱起这个孩子，照例温柔送上祝愿→③孩子被父母接走时，Dave 眼眶湿润，满是欣慰与感动；
第二段：Dave从没想到简单的拥抱能给婴儿和他自己带来这么多温暖。
→④他想起八年来每个拥抱与注视，心中充满暖流→⑤他领悟到付出爱也会收获爱，陪伴让彼此都更坚强→⑥他决心继续守护更多小生命，把NICU当成永远的家。
四.段落续写
One Tuesday morning, a nurse told Dave that one tiny baby he had held for months was going home soon. A warm smile spread across his wrinkled face, yet a touch of reluctance lingered in his eyes. He went to the incubator and gently lifted the little one into his arms for the last time. Feeling the baby's soft heartbeat against his chest, he leaned in close and whispered softly, "Grow strong, grow smart, grow kind." When the happy parents carried the healthy baby out of the door, tears welled up in Dave's eyes—not of sadness, but of pride and joy.
Dave never expected that simple hugs could bring so much warmth to both the babies and himself. Looking back on the past eight years, he realized that every cuddle, every monitor-check, and every whispered wish had woven him into their lives. In giving his love and warmth, he had received love and purpose in return. The NICU was no longer just a ward to him; it had become his true family, one he would keep guarding with open arms, hug after hug, for as long as he could.
