英语书面表达满分备考资料：介绍新学校（邀请朋友参观）

题目要求

81. 假如你是李明，请根据以下提示，以电子邮件的形式向你的朋友(Tom)介绍你的新学校，邀请他到你们学校来参观。

提示：(1) What is the name of your school?(2) What are the buildings in your school?(3) How do you feel about the school?

注意：(1) 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。(2) 词数70左右（邮件格式及开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

已给开头：Dear Tom,I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School.

已给结尾：Yours,Li Ming

基础范文 1（侧重教学楼与图书馆）

Dear Tom,

I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. There are three tall teaching buildings and a big library in my school. The library is my favorite place because it has many interesting books. I often read books there after class. The playground is also very large. We often play football there with our friends. I feel very happy and lucky to study here. The teachers are kind and the classmates are friendly. Would you like to come and visit my school? I can show you around. I am sure you will like it.

Yours,

Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：

我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。我的学校有三栋高高的教学楼和一个大图书馆。图书馆是我最喜欢的地方，因为它有很多有趣的书。我经常在课后在那里读书。操场也很大。我们经常和朋友们在那里踢足球。在这里学习我感到很开心和幸运。老师们很和蔼，同学们很友好。你愿意来参观我的学校吗？我可以带你参观。我相信你会喜欢它的。

你的，

李明

亮点句型：There are...（存在句）、because引导的原因状语从句、Would you like to...（邀请句型）重点词汇： teaching building（教学楼）、library（图书馆）、playground（操场）、favorite（最喜欢的）、friendly（友好的）结构分析： 先介绍建筑（教学楼+图书馆+操场），再表达感受（开心、幸运），最后发出邀请。

基础范文 2（侧重实验室与操场）

Dear Tom,

I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. In our school, there is a modern lab and a huge playground. We do experiments in the lab and do sports on the playground. The dining hall is clean and the food is delicious. I usually have lunch there with my classmates. I love my new school very much because it is beautiful and full of fun. I am looking forward to your visit. Please come and see it for yourself. I am sure you will like it.

Yours,

Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：

我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。在我们学校，有一个现代化的实验室和一个巨大的操场。我们在实验室做实验，在操场上做运动。食堂很干净，食物很美味。我通常和同学们在那里吃午饭。我非常爱我的新学校，因为它美丽且充满乐趣。我期待你的来访。请你自己来看看吧。我相信你会喜欢它的。

你的，

李明

亮点句型：there is...、because原因状语从句、look forward to（期待）重点词汇： modern lab（现代化实验室）、do experiments（做实验）、dining hall（食堂）、delicious（美味的）、full of fun（充满乐趣）结构分析： 按“实验室→操场→食堂”的顺序介绍，最后表达喜爱和期待。

基础范文 3（侧重花园与整体环境）

Dear Tom,

I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. It looks like a beautiful garden. There are many trees and flowers everywhere. We have a big gym and a nice music room. I feel very excited to study in such a nice place. The teachers are helpful and I have made many new friends. I really want you to see it. Welcome to my school anytime! I am waiting for you. Please write back soon.

Yours,

Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：

我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。它看起来像一个美丽的花园。到处有很多树和花。我们有一个大体育馆和一个漂亮的音乐室。在这么好的地方学习我感到很兴奋。老师们很乐于助人，我交了很多新朋友。我真的想让你看看它。随时欢迎来我的学校！我在等你。请尽快回信。

你的，

李明

亮点句型：looks like（比喻）、There are...everywhere、such a nice place（such+a+adj.+n.）重点词汇： gym（体育馆）、music room（音乐室）、excited（兴奋的）、helpful（乐于助人的）、make friends（交朋友）结构分析： 用比喻开篇，营造画面感，结尾用感叹句表达欢迎。

基础范文 4（侧重食堂与宿舍）

Dear Tom,

I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. There are several classroom buildings, a library, and a large dining hall. The food in the dining hall is very tasty. I usually have lunch there with my friends. We often talk and laugh together. I feel very comfortable and happy here. It is a great place to study and live. I hope you can come to visit my school soon. You will love it. I am waiting for you.

Yours,

Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：

我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。有几栋教室楼、一个图书馆和一个大食堂。食堂的食物非常可口。我通常和朋友们在那里吃午饭。我们经常一起聊天和大笑。我在这里感到非常舒适和开心。这是一个学习和生活的好地方。我希望你能尽快来参观我的学校。你会喜欢它的。我在等你。

你的，

李明

亮点句型：There are...、It is a great place to do sth.（不定式作定语）重点词汇： classroom building（教室楼）、dining hall（食堂）、tasty（可口的）、comfortable（舒适的）结构分析： 以食堂为核心，贴近生活，最后用You will love it增强说服力。

基础范文 5（侧重科技与现代化）

Dear Tom,

I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. It is very modern. We have a science building and a computer room. We can learn a lot of new things there. The playground is big and we have PE class there. I feel proud of my school because it is so wonderful. I am very happy every day. Please come and visit. I will be your guide. I am sure you will have a good time here.

Yours,

Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：

我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。它非常现代化。我们有一个科学楼和一个计算机房。我们可以在那里学到很多新东西。操场很大，我们在那里上体育课。我为我的学校感到骄傲，因为它是如此精彩。我每天都很开心。请来参观吧。我会做你的向导。我相信你会在这里玩得很开心。

你的，

李明

亮点句型：be proud of（为……骄傲）、because原因状语从句重点词汇： modern（现代化的）、science building（科学楼）、computer room（计算机房）、proud（骄傲的）、guide（向导）结构分析： 突出“现代化”特点，结尾用I will be your guide增强互动感。

基础范文 6（侧重师生关系与感受）

Dear Tom,

I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. There are many buildings, such as a teaching building and a library. But I like the teachers best. They are very friendly and patient. I feel very lucky to be a student here. I have learned a lot and made great progress. Would you like to come to my school? I am waiting for you. Please write back soon. I hope to see you soon.

Yours,

Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：

我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。有很多建筑，比如教学楼和图书馆。但我最喜欢老师们。他们非常友好和耐心。在这里当学生我感到很幸运。我学到了很多，取得了很大进步。你愿意来我的学校吗？我在等你。请尽快回信。我希望很快见到你。

你的，

李明

亮点句型：such as（举例）、Would you like to...（邀请）重点词汇： friendly（友好的）、patient（耐心的）、make progress（取得进步）、wait for（等待）结构分析： 先抑后扬，突出“老师最好”，情感真挚。

基础范文 7（侧重建筑布局与邀请）

Dear Tom,

I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. In the center of the school, there is a big playground. Around it are three teaching buildings and a library. The library is quiet and bright. I feel very happy studying here. The environment is good for learning. I really hope you can come and visit. We can play basketball together. I am looking forward to your visit. Please write back soon.

Yours,

Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：

我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。在学校的中心，有一个大操场。它的周围是三栋教学楼和一个图书馆。图书馆安静又明亮。我在这里学习感到很开心。环境对学习有好处。我真的希望你能来参观。我们可以一起打篮球。我期待你的来访。请尽快回信。

你的，

李明

亮点句型：In the center of...（方位状语前置）、Around it are...（倒装句雏形）重点词汇： in the center of（在……的中心）、environment（环境）、play basketball（打篮球）结构分析： 按空间顺序介绍，逻辑清晰，结尾用具体活动（打篮球）吸引对方。

基础范文 8（侧重多功能教室）

Dear Tom,

I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. It has a large hall, a gym, and a nice library. We have art classes in the art room and music classes in the music room. I feel very excited about my school life. It is colorful and interesting. I want to invite you to visit my school. You can see how beautiful it is. I am sure you will love it. Please come and see it.

Yours,

Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：

我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。它有一个大厅、一个体育馆和一个漂亮的图书馆。我们在美术室上美术课，在音乐室上音乐课。我对我的学校生活感到很兴奋。它是丰富多彩且有趣的。我想邀请你来参观我的学校。你可以看到它有多美。我相信你会喜欢它的。请来看看吧。

你的，

李明

亮点句型：have...in...（在……上……课）、how beautiful it is（感叹句作宾语）重点词汇： art room（美术室）、music room（音乐室）、colorful（丰富多彩的）、invite（邀请）结构分析： 按“功能教室”分类介绍，突出课程丰富。

基础范文 9（简洁明了版）

Dear Tom,

I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. There are many tall buildings and a big playground. The library is full of books. I feel very happy here because the teachers and students are all very nice. I like my new school very much. I would like to invite you to come and visit. Please write back soon. I am waiting for your reply. I hope to see you soon.

Yours,

Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：

我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。有很多高楼和一个大操场。图书馆里满是书。我在这里很开心，因为老师和同学们都很好。我非常喜欢我的新学校。我想邀请你来参观。请尽快回信。我在等你的回复。我希望很快见到你。

你的，

李明

亮点句型：be full of（充满）、because原因状语从句重点词汇： tall building（高楼）、be full of（充满）、write back（回信）结构分析： 最简洁的版本，适合考试时间紧张时使用。

基础范文 10（综合版）

Dear Tom,

I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. It is a big and beautiful school. There is a library, a dining hall, and a large playground. My favorite place is the library because I can read books there. I feel very lucky to study in this school. The teachers are excellent and I enjoy my classes. I hope you can come to visit my school. I will show you around. You are always welcome. Please write back soon.

Yours,

Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：

我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。它是一所又大又美的学校。有一个图书馆、一个食堂和一个大操场。我最喜欢的地方是图书馆，因为我可以在那里读书。在这所学校学习我感到很幸运。老师们很优秀，我很喜欢我的课程。我希望你能来参观我的学校。我会带你参观。你永远受欢迎。请尽快回信。

你的，

李明

亮点句型：My favorite place is...because...、show sb. around（带某人参观）重点词汇： dining hall（食堂）、favorite（最喜欢的）、excellent（优秀的）、show around（带参观）结构分析： 综合了建筑、感受、邀请三大要素，是最稳妥的模板。

一、重点词汇（Key Vocabulary）

二、固定搭配（Fixed Collocations）

三、句式（Sentence Patterns）

四、开篇句式（Opening Sentences）

五、结尾句式（Closing Sentences）

六、过渡句（Transitional Sentences）

第二部分：高阶版10篇范文 + 整篇中文对照 + 解析

适用目标： 冲刺高分、拿满分，适合基础较好的学生。特点： 高级词汇、复杂句式（定语从句、倒装句、强调句、虚拟语气、非谓语动词），正文均80词以上。

高阶范文 1（分词作状语 + 定语从句）

Dear Tom,I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. Located in the east of our city, it is a modern and beautiful campus. Equipped with a well-stocked library and a spacious playground, the school provides us with an ideal environment for learning. What impresses me most is the friendly atmosphere here. The teachers are knowledgeable and patient, while the classmates are helpful and warm-hearted. I feel extremely delighted and privileged to study here. I sincerely invite you to visit my school, and I will be your guide.Yours,Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。坐落于我们城市的东部，它是一个现代化且美丽的校园。配备有藏书丰富的图书馆和宽敞的操场，学校为我们提供了理想的学习环境。最令我印象深刻的是这里友好的氛围。老师们知识渊博且耐心，而同学们乐于助人且热心。在这里学习我感到极其高兴和荣幸。我真诚地邀请你来参观我的学校，我会做你的向导。你的，李明

高级句式：Located in...（过去分词作状语）、Equipped with...（过去分词作状语）、What impresses me most is...（主语从句）高级词汇： well-stocked（藏书丰富的）、spacious（宽敞的）、ideal（理想的）、atmosphere（氛围）、knowledgeable（知识渊博的）、privileged（荣幸的）结构分析： 先环境，再设施，再感受，最后邀请，逻辑层层递进。

高阶范文 2（倒装句 + 强调句）

Dear Tom,I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. It is a school where dreams take flight. There are not only standard teaching buildings but also a state-of-the-art science lab and a comprehensive library. Never before have I seen such a beautiful campus. It is the positive atmosphere that makes me feel at home. The teachers are so devoted that I have made rapid progress in my studies. I feel grateful to be part of this big family. Would you like to come and experience it yourself? I am eagerly looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。这是一所梦想腾飞的学校。不仅有标准的教学楼，还有最先进的科学实验室和综合图书馆。我从未见过如此美丽的校园。正是积极的氛围让我感到自在。老师们如此敬业，以至于我在学习上取得了快速进步。能成为这个大家庭的一员我感到很感激。你愿意亲自来体验一下吗？我热切期待你的到来。你的，李明

高级句式：where dreams take flight（定语从句，比喻）、Never before have I seen...（倒装句）、It is...that...（强调句）、so...that...（结果状语从句）高级词汇： state-of-the-art（最先进的）、comprehensive（综合的）、devoted（敬业的）、grateful（感激的）结构分析： 用比喻开篇，倒装句增强语气，强调句突出感受。

高阶范文 3（主语从句 + 强调句 + 定语从句）

Dear Tom,I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. It is the diverse buildings and the positive atmosphere that make it unique. We have a comprehensive library, a huge gym, and several teaching buildings. What I love most is the quiet reading room, where I can broaden my horizons and gain knowledge. I feel truly inspired here every day. The teachers are not only mentors but also friends. I would be delighted if you could come and visit my school. You are always welcome.Yours,Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。正是多样的建筑和积极的氛围使它独一无二。我们有一个综合图书馆、一个大型体育馆和几栋教学楼。我最喜欢的是安静的阅览室，在那里我可以开阔眼界、获取知识。我每天在这里都感到真正受到启发。老师们不仅是导师，也是朋友。如果你能来参观我的学校，我会很高兴。你永远受欢迎。你的，李明

高级句式：It is...that...（强调句）、What I love most is...（主语从句）、where I can...（非限制性定语从句）高级词汇： diverse（多样的）、unique（独特的）、broaden one's horizons（开阔眼界）、inspired（受启发的）、mentors（导师）结构分析： 强调“独特性”，用定语从句细化阅读室的感受。

高阶范文 4（拟人化 + 比喻 + 排比）

Dear Tom,I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. Like a beautiful garden, it is full of green trees and colorful flowers. The teaching buildings stand tall, and the playground comes alive after class. I feel energetic and happy here every single day. The teachers are not only strict with us but also care about our lives. We can not only learn knowledge but also develop our interests. I am eager to show you around my school. Please let me know when you are free.Yours,Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。像一个美丽的花园，它满是绿树和五彩缤纷的花朵。教学楼高耸矗立，操场在课后活跃起来。我在这里每一天都感到充满活力和快乐。老师们不仅对我们严格，也关心我们的生活。我们不仅能学知识，还能培养兴趣。我渴望带你参观我的学校。请告诉我你什么时候有空。你的，李明

高级句式：Like a beautiful garden（比喻）、comes alive（拟人）、not only...but also...（并列句）高级词汇： energetic（充满活力的）、strict with（对……严格）、develop interests（培养兴趣）、eager（渴望的）结构分析： 画面感强，情感饱满，排比句式增强节奏。

高阶范文 5（非谓语动词 + 排比 + 宾语从句）

Dear Tom,I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. Boasting a modern library, a large gym, and a clean dining hall, it offers us a wonderful environment. To study here is to grow happily. I feel lucky to have such excellent teachers and friendly classmates. We can not only learn knowledge but also develop our interests. I sincerely hope that you can come and visit my school. I am sure that you will love it as much as I do. I am expecting your reply.Yours,Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。拥有现代化的图书馆、大型体育馆和干净的食堂，它为我们提供了极好的环境。在这里学习就是快乐成长。我感到幸运能有如此优秀的老师和友好的同学。我们不仅能学知识，还能培养兴趣。我真诚希望你能来参观我的学校。我相信你会和我一样喜欢它。我期待你的回复。你的，李明

高级句式：Boasting...（现在分词作状语）、To study here is to grow happily（不定式作主语和表语）、I hope that...（宾语从句）高级词汇： boast（拥有）、offer（提供）、excellent（优秀的）、sincerely（真诚地）结构分析： 开头用分词短语高度概括，中间用不定式点明主题，结尾用宾语从句表达期待。

高阶范文 6（宾语从句 + 倒装句 + 虚拟语气）

Dear Tom,I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. I firmly believe that it is a perfect place for us to grow. There are advanced labs, a spacious library, and a standard playground. So excellent is the school that I have fallen in love with it. I feel motivated and joyful every day. The colorful school life makes me happy and confident. I would appreciate it if you could come to visit my school. I am expecting your early reply.Yours,Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。我坚信这是一个供我们成长的完美地方。有先进的实验室、宽敞的图书馆和标准的操场。这所学校如此优秀，以至于我爱上了它。我每天都感到有动力和快乐。丰富多彩的校园生活让我快乐自信。如果你能来参观我的学校，我会很感激。我期待你的早日回复。你的，李明

高级句式：I believe that...（宾语从句）、So excellent is the school that...（倒装+结果状语从句）、I would appreciate it if...（虚拟语气）高级词汇： firmly（坚定地）、advanced（先进的）、spacious（宽敞的）、motivated（有动力的）、confident（自信的）结构分析： 倒装句是最大亮点，虚拟语气结尾非常礼貌。

高阶范文 7（方位词 + 定语从句 + 分词）

Dear Tom,I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. In the center of the campus stands a magnificent teaching building, which is surrounded by a library and a gym. The environment is peaceful and inviting. I feel very content and inspired here. It is a place where I can focus on my studies and achieve my potential. The teachers are patient and the students are friendly. I would be delighted if you could come and visit. I can show you around.Yours,Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。在校园的中心矗立着一栋宏伟的教学楼，它被图书馆和体育馆环绕。环境宁静而宜人。我在这里感到非常满足和受启发。这是一个我可以专注于学习并发挥潜能的地方。老师们耐心，同学们友好。如果你能来参观，我会很高兴。我可以带你参观。你的，李明

高级句式：In the center of...stands...（完全倒装）、which is surrounded by...（非限制性定语从句）、where I can...（定语从句）高级词汇： magnificent（宏伟的）、surround（环绕）、inviting（宜人的）、content（满足的）、achieve one's potential（发挥潜能）结构分析： 空间顺序清晰，倒装句开篇极具视觉冲击力。

高阶范文 8（并列句 + 高级词汇）

Dear Tom,I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. It consists of several teaching buildings, a well-equipped library, and a standard playground. Not only is the campus beautiful, but the atmosphere is also harmonious. I feel extremely fortunate to study here. The colorful school life makes me happy every day. The teachers are helpful and the classmates are friendly. I strongly recommend you come and visit my school. You will have a great time here.Yours,Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。它由几栋教学楼、一个设备齐全的图书馆和一个标准操场组成。校园不仅美丽，而且氛围和谐。在这里学习我感到极其幸运。丰富多彩的校园生活让我每天快乐。老师们乐于助人，同学们友好。我强烈建议你来参观我的学校。你在这里会玩得很开心。你的，李明

高级句式：consist of（由……组成）、Not only...but also...（倒装+并列）高级词汇： consist of（由……组成）、well-equipped（设备齐全的）、harmonious（和谐的）、fortunate（幸运的）、strongly recommend（强烈建议）结构分析： 用consist of高度概括设施，倒装句增强语气，结尾用strongly recommend加强邀请力度。

高阶范文 9（虚拟语气 + 强调句）

Dear Tom,I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. Were it not for the wonderful teachers and beautiful campus, I wouldn't be so happy. We have a big library, a modern lab, and a spacious playground. It is the friendly environment that makes me feel at home. I genuinely love my new school and I have made many good friends here. I would be thrilled if you could visit my school. Please write back soon.Yours,Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。如果不是因为优秀的老师和美丽的校园，我不会这么开心。我们有一个大图书馆、一个现代化实验室和一个宽敞的操场。正是友好的环境让我感到自在。我真心爱我的新学校，我在这里交了很多好朋友。如果你能参观我的学校，我会很激动。请尽快回信。你的，李明

高级句式：Were it not for...（虚拟语气倒装）、It is...that...（强调句）、I would be thrilled if...（虚拟语气）高级词汇： genuinely（真心地）、thrilled（激动的）、spacious（宽敞的）结构分析： 虚拟语气开篇极具文学性，强调句点明核心感受。

高阶范文 10（综合全能型）

Dear Tom,I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's called Sunshine Middle School. Covering a large area, it has a variety of buildings, ranging from a library to a gym. What impresses me most is its vibrant atmosphere. I feel privileged and delighted to study here. It is a place where I can achieve my potential and broaden my horizons. The teachers are excellent and the students are friendly. I am longing to invite you to visit my school. I will show you around personally.Yours,Li Ming

亲爱的汤姆：我写信是为了告诉你关于我的新学校。它叫做阳光中学。占地广阔，它有各种各样的建筑，从图书馆到体育馆不等。最令我印象深刻的是它充满活力的氛围。在这里学习我感到荣幸和高兴。这是一个我可以发挥潜能、开阔眼界的地方。老师们优秀，同学们友好。我渴望邀请你来参观我的学校。我会亲自带你参观。你的，李明

高级句式：Covering...（现在分词作状语）、ranging from...to...（现在分词作定语）、What impresses me most is...（主语从句）、where I can...（定语从句）高级词汇： a variety of（各种各样的）、vibrant（充满活力的）、privileged（荣幸的）、achieve one's potential（发挥潜能）、broaden one's horizons（开阔眼界）、personally（亲自）结构分析： 集分词、主语从句、定语从句于一体，词汇高级，逻辑严密，是冲刺满分的首选。

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