七年级英语上册期中复习写作(书面表达)专题
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七年级英语上学期期中考试写作(书面表达)专项练习
2026.11.06
Passage 1
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom来信想了解你的个人爱好、家庭情况和学校环境。请你根据以下提示问题给他回一封电子邮件。
What is your hobby?
What is your family like?
What is your favorite place in your school and why?
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；60词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m very happy to receive your email.
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Please tell me about yourself next time. Best wishes! Yours,
Li Hua
范文
Dear Tom,
I’m very happy to receive your email.
I’d like to tell you something about myself. My hobby is playing basketball because it makes me strong and happy. I have a warm family. There are three people in my family: my parents and me. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. As for my school, my favorite place is the school library. It is very quiet and I can read many interesting books there.
What about you? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作指导
一、审题：三个问题都要回答
这是一封回给英国笔友的电子邮件。题目问了三个问题，缺一个就会扣分：第一，你的爱好是什么；第二，你的家庭是什么样的；第三，你最喜欢学校的哪个地方，为什么。用三段式或一段紧凑式来写，把三个问题分别讲清楚即可。开头结尾已给出，不用重复。
二、怎么写（词数分配）
总共60词左右，篇幅很短，所以不要写废话，直奔主题。可以用大约15词写爱好并说明原因；用大约20词写家庭情况（几口人、父母职业等）；用大约20词写最喜欢的学校地点及原因；最后用一句简短的过渡句收尾。每句话都要紧扣题目。
三、句型（背下来）
写爱好可以用：My hobby is playing basketball because it makes me strong and happy. 或者 I like reading books in my free time.
写家庭可以用：I have a warm family. There are three people in my family: my parents and me. 再补一句 My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher.
写学校地点及原因可以用：My favorite place is the school library. It is very quiet and I can read many interesting books there.
四、最容易丢分的三个地方
第一是漏掉“原因”。题目问了 why，所以写最爱的地方时，一定要加 because 或 It is... and I can... 这样的原因说明，只写 My favorite place is the library 是不够的。
第二是词数超标或严重不足。要求60词左右，写完数一下，太少显得内容单薄，写太多容易出错。控制在55到70词之间最稳。
第三是忽略邮件格式。虽然开头结尾已给出，但中间的过渡句不能少，比如用I'd like to tell you something about myself 引出下文，最后用 What about you? 或 I'm looking forward to your reply 自然收尾。
五、加分小技巧
多用and、because 等连词，让句子连贯。写家庭时具体一点，比如写父母的职业，比只写 There are three people 更充实。写爱好和学校地点时都带上简短的原因，回答完整，印象更好。
六、写完自查
对照检查：爱好写了吗，家庭情况写了吗，最喜欢的学校地点和原因写了吗，词数在60左
右吗，有没有透露真实学校和姓名，有没有过渡句和收尾句。
Passage 2
假如你是李明，你进入中学已经有一段时间了，你的英国网友Tom很想了解你的新学校。请根据以下内容提示，给他写一封e-mail，介绍一下你的新学校。
内容提示：
1. What places are there in your school?
2. Which is your favourite place in your school? Why?
3. What do you like to do at school?
4.Tell me more about your school.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数：80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to introduce my school to you.
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范文
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to introduce my school to you.
My new school is very big and beautiful. There are many places in it, such as a big playground, a library, a dining hall and some tall buildings. My favourite place is the library. Because it is very quiet and I can read many interesting books there. At school, I like to play basketball with my classmates after class. We always have a good time. I also like to talk with my teachers because they are very friendly and helpful.
All my teachers and classmates are nice to me. I love my new school very much. I hope you can come and visit it one day. Yours, Li Ming
写作指导
一、审题：四个要点一个不能漏
这是一封给英国网友的回信，介绍新学校。题目给了四个提示问题，必须全部回答：第一，学校有哪些地方；第二，你最喜欢哪里以及为什么；第三，在学校你喜欢做什么；第四，关于学校的补充信息。用一段或两段紧凑的结构，按顺序把四个问题写清楚即可。
二、怎么写（词数分配）
总共80词左右，篇幅不长，直奔主题。用大约20词写学校有哪些地方（比如操场、图书馆、食堂）；用大约20词写最喜欢的地方并说明原因；用大约20词写在学校喜欢做什么；用大约15词补充学校其他信息（比如老师同学很好、学校很漂亮），最后一句友好收尾。每句话紧扣题目，不写废话。
三、句型（背下来）
写学校地点：There are many places in it, such as a big playground, a library and a dining hall.
写最喜欢的地方及原因：My favourite place is the library. Because it is very quiet and I can read many interesting books there.
写在学校喜欢做什么：At school, I like to play basketball with my classmates after class. We always have a good time.
补充信息及收尾：All my teachers and classmates are nice to me. I hope you can come and visit it one day.
四、最容易丢分的三个地方
第一是漏掉“为什么”。题目问了 Which is your favourite place and why，写最喜欢的地方时一定要加 Because... 说明原因，只写 My favourite place is the library 是不够的。
第二是地点词写错。七上刚学方位和校园建筑，playground（操场）、library（图书馆）、dining hall（食堂）这些词要拼写准确，不要和 classroom、office 混淆。
第三是词数控制不好。要求80词左右，写到70-90词最稳，太少显得单薄，太多容易出语法错误。写完数一下。
五、加分小技巧
多用 such as 举例，比如 such as a big playground, a library，让内容更具体。写喜欢的活动时加上感受，比如 We always have a good time，比只写 I like playing basketball 更生动。全篇用一般现在时，句子简单正确，不用复杂的长难句。最后加一句邀请的话，显得热情有礼貌。
六、写完自查
对照检查：学校有哪些地方写了吗，最喜欢的地方和原因写了吗，在学校喜欢做什么写了吗，补充信息写了吗，词数在80左右吗，有没有透露真实学校和姓名，有没有友好收尾。
Passage 3
今天英语课上，老师设置了一个猜测游戏。老师要求大家介绍班里的一位同学，谈一谈他/她的年龄、外貌、性格和爱好，但不要说出他/她的名字，最后请同学们猜猜他/她是谁。请你按照老师的要求描述一位同学，内容提示如下：
How old is he/she?
What is he/she like?
What are his/her hobbies?
Something more about him or her.
注意：
1. 文中不得透露个人真实信息；
2. 词数：不少于80词；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, everyone! I’m very glad to introduce my classmate.
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范文
Hi, everyone! I’m very glad to introduce my classmate.
He is thirteen years old. He is a tall and strong boy. He has short black hair and big eyes. He always wears a pair of glasses. He looks very cool. He is very friendly and helpful. He is always ready to help others. He is also very funny and often makes us laugh.
He has many hobbies. He likes playing basketball very much. He often plays basketball with us after school. He is good at it. Also, he likes reading books in his free time. He knows many interesting things.
We all like him very much. Can you guess who he is?
写作指导
一、审题：四个要点一个不能漏
这是一篇“猜猜他是谁”的游戏描述。题目给了四个提示：年龄、外貌、性格、爱好，最后要加一点补充信息，并请大家猜猜他是谁。开头已给出，结尾要自己写上“Can you guess who he is?”。用三段式来写最清晰：第一段写年龄和外貌，第二段写性格和爱好，第三段写补充信息和结尾。
二、怎么写（词数分配）
总共不少于80词，篇幅适中。第一段约25词，用 He is... years old 写年龄，用 He is tall/strong, He has... hair/eyes 写外貌。第二段约30词，用 He is friendly/helpful/funny 写性格，用 He likes playing basketball/reading 写爱好。第三段约20词，补充一句大家都很喜欢他，最后加上猜人名的句子。每句话紧扣题目，不写废话。
三、句型（背下来）
写年龄：He is thirteen years old.
写外貌：He is a tall and strong boy. He has short black hair and big eyes. He always wears a pair of glasses.
写性格：He is very friendly and helpful. He is always ready to help others. He is also very funny and often makes us laugh.
写爱好：He likes playing basketball very much. Also, he likes reading books in his free time.
写结尾：We all like him very much. Can you guess who he is?
四、最容易丢分的三个地方
第一是忘记写外貌特征。题目明确要求写外貌，但有人只写性格和爱好，漏掉外貌直接丢内容分。一定要写出身高、体型、头发、眼睛等具体特征。
第二是没有写结尾句。这是一个猜测游戏，最后一定要写Can you guess who he is? 或者 Who is he? 少了这句话就不符合题目要求。
第三是代词用错。全篇要一直用he 或 she，不要前面用 he 后面用 she，写完检查一下代词是否一致。
五、加分小技巧
多用and、also 等连接词，让句子连贯。写外貌时具体一点，比如 short black hair and big eyes，比只写 He looks nice 更生动。写性格和爱好时带上简单的例子，比如 often makes us laugh，让描述更有画面感。全篇用一般现在时，句子简单正确，不用复杂的长难句。
六、写完自查
对照检查：年龄写了吗，外貌特征写了吗，性格写了吗，爱好写了吗，补充信息写了吗，最后有没有请大家猜猜他是谁，词数不少于80词吗，有没有透露真实姓名。
Passage 4
古人云：“家和万事兴。”假设你是林晓，学校正在开展“我的温馨家庭”主题分享活动，请你根据以下提示问题，从家庭成员构成、外貌、性格、日常活动和个人感受等方面，写一篇介绍自己家庭的短文。
提示问题：
How many people are there in your family?
Who are they and what are they like?
What do you usually do together with your family?
Express your love for your family.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息：词数80—100词；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, everyone, I’m Lin Xiao. Let me tell you about my warm family.
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范文
Hi, everyone, I’m Lin Xiao. Let me tell you about my warm family.
There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my little sister and I. My father is tall and strong. He is very funny. My mother is beautiful. She has long black hair and she is very kind. My sister is only five years old. She is cute and lovely.
At weekends, we usually do many things together. We often go to the park to play. Sometimes we stay at home and watch TV. We always have a good time.
I love my family very much. They always help and care about me. I feel very happy to be with them. What a warm family!
写作指导
一、审题：四个要点一个不能漏
这篇短文要求介绍温馨家庭。题目给了四个提示：家里有几口人、他们是谁以及性格外貌如何、你们通常一起做什么、表达你对家人的爱。开头已给出，直接接着写。用三段式：第一段写家庭成员构成及外貌性格，第二段写日常活动，第三段写个人感受和表达爱。
二、怎么写（词数分配）
总共80到100词，篇幅适中。第一段约35词，先写 There are... people in my family 交代人数，再用 He is tall... She is kind... 写出父母和兄弟姐妹的外貌性格。第二段约30词，用 We usually/often... 写周末一起做的事（比如去公园、看电视）。第三段约25词，用 I love my family 表达感受和爱。每句话紧扣题目，不写废话。
三、句型（背下来）
写人数和成员：There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my little sister and I.
写外貌性格：My father is tall and strong. He is very funny. My mother is beautiful. She is very kind. My sister is cute and lovely.
写日常活动：At weekends, we usually do many things together. We often go to the park. Sometimes we watch TV at home. We always have a good time.
表达感受和爱：I love my family very much. They always care about me. I feel very happy.
四、最容易丢分的三个地方
第一是漏掉外貌描写。题目明确要求写“外貌”，很多人只写了“爸爸很幽默、妈妈很善良”，忘记写“高、漂亮、长头发”等外貌特征，直接丢内容分。
第二是忘记写日常活动。题目问What do you usually do together，一定要有 We usually/often... 这样的具体活动，比如去公园、看电视、做饭，不能只写 We are happy。
第三是缺少表达爱意的句子。最后一段一定要写出I love my family very much，这是题目明确要求的，少了一句就扣分。
五、加分小技巧
多用and、but、because 等连词，让句子连贯。写外貌具体一点，比如 has long black hair，比只写 beautiful 更生动。写活动时加上感受，比如 We always have a good time，让内容更充实。全篇用一般现在时，句子简单正确，不用复杂的长难句。
六、写完自查
对照检查：家庭成员人数写了吗，外貌和性格写了吗，日常活动写了吗，表达爱意了吗，词数在80到100之间吗，有没有透露真实姓名。
Passage 5
新学期、新同学、新老师、新气象、新希望。假如你叫李华，你将作为学校学生代表前往英国参加一个交换生项目，其中有一个环节是介绍你的新学校和学校生活。请你根据以下几条主线谈谈你的新学期生活：
What is your new school like?
Which is your favorite place in your school?
What activities do you like?
Something more about your new school and your school life.
注意：文章不得透露个人真实信息，词数100词左右（开头结尾已给出的词不计入总词数）。
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I’d like to share with you something about my school and my school life.
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This is my school and my school life, I look forward to knowing about yours.
范文
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I’d like to share with you something about my school and my school life.
My new school is very big and beautiful. There are many tall buildings, a big playground and a clean dining hall in it. My favorite place is the school library. It is very quiet. I can read many interesting books there after class.
We have many activities at school. I like playing basketball and football best because they make me strong and happy. I often play them with my classmates after school. Also, we have an art club and an English club. I am in the English club. We often sing English songs and play games together.
I think my school life is very busy but interesting. All my teachers and classmates are very friendly. I love my new school very much.
This is my school and my school life, I look forward to knowing about yours.
写作指导
一、审题：四个要点一个不能漏
这是一篇向英国交换生介绍新学校和学校生活的短文。题目给了四个要点：第一，新学校是什么样的；第二，你最喜欢学校的哪个地方；第三，你喜欢什么活动；第四，关于新学校和学校生活的补充内容。开头和结尾已给出，直接接着写。用三段式最清晰：第一段写学校环境及最喜欢的地方，第二段写喜欢的活动，第三段写补充信息（如感受、师生关系）。
二、怎么写（词数分配）
总共100词左右，篇幅适中。第一段约35词，写学校的大致面貌（big and beautiful, many buildings）并点出最喜欢的地方（library）及原因（quiet, read books）。第二段约35词，写喜欢的活动（playing basketball/football）及原因（make me strong），再补充一点其他活动（如英语俱乐部）。第三段约30词，写你对学校生活的评价（busy but interesting）和师生关系（friendly），表达喜爱之情。每句话紧扣题目。（本篇词数较多，可以删减）
三、句型（背下来）
写学校面貌：My new school is very big and beautiful. There are many tall buildings and a big playground.
写最喜欢的地方及原因：My favorite place is the school library. It is very quiet. I can read many interesting books there.
写喜欢的活动：I like playing basketball best because it makes me strong. We often sing English songs and play games together.
写补充信息和感受：I think my school life is very busy but interesting. All my teachers and classmates are very friendly. I love my new school very much.
四、最容易丢分的三个地方
第一是漏掉“原因”。题目问 Which is your favorite place，并且需要说明为什么。写图书馆时一定要加 It is quiet 或 I can read books，不能只写 My favorite place is the library。
第二是活动写得太空泛。题目要求写What activities do you like，有人只写 I like sports，没有具体到篮球、足球或英语俱乐部。建议至少写出两项具体的活动，并说明喜欢的原因（如 make me strong）。
第三是忽视时态和人称。介绍学校和自己每天的生活，全篇要用一般现在时，主语是I 或 We，不要混用过去时。写完检查动词形式是否正确。
五、加分小技巧
多用and、because、also 等连接词，让句子读起来流畅。写活动和感受时加上原因，比如 because they make me strong and happy，比单纯罗列活动更充实。最后一段加上一句对学校生活的总体评价（busy but interesting），能提升文章的完整度。全篇用简单句和基础词汇，保证正确率最重要。
六、写完自查
对照检查：学校面貌写了吗，最喜欢的地方及原因写了吗，喜欢的活动写了吗，补充信息（感受、师生关系）写了吗，词数在100左右吗，有没有透露真实学校和个人信息，结尾是否与给出的句子自然衔接。全部打勾，这篇作文就稳了。
Passage 6
你进入初中生活已经有一段时间了。请根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你的朋友，包括姓名、物品摆放、家人和爱好等信息。
内容提示问题：
1. What are your friend’s first name and family name?
2. Is your friend tidy? Where are his/her school things?
3. What about his/her family and hobby?
4. Something more about your friend.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数：80-100词；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My friend
I’m so happy to have a good friend in this new school.
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范文
My friend
I’m so happy to have a good friend in this new school.
His first name is Peter and his family name is Green. He is a very tidy boy. In his room, his school things are always in the right places. His books are in the bookcase, his pens are in the pencil box, and his schoolbag is on the desk.
There are four people in his family: his parents, his sister and him. He has a happy family. As for his hobby, he likes playing ping-pong very much. He often plays it with me after school.
Peter is very friendly and helpful. He often helps me with my English. We always have a good time together. I am lucky to have a friend like him.
写作指导
一、审题：四个要点一个不能漏
这是一篇介绍朋友的短文。题目给了四个提示：第一，朋友的名和姓（first name 和 family name）；第二，朋友是否整洁，学习用品放在哪里；第三，家人的情况和爱好；第四，关于朋友的补充信息。开头已给出，直接接着写。用三段式最清晰：第一段写姓名、是否整洁及物品摆放，第二段写家人和爱好，第三段写补充信息和感受。
二、怎么写（词数分配）
总共80到100词。第一段约35词，先写 His/Her first name is... and his/her family name is...，再用 He/She is very tidy 回答是否整洁，然后用 His/Her books are in the bookcase... 写物品摆放。第二段约30词，用 There are... people in his/her family 写家庭人数，用 He/She likes playing... 写爱好。第三段约20词，写朋友的性格（friendly, helpful）和你和他/她相处的感受。每句话紧扣题目。
三、句型（背下来）
写姓名：His first name is Peter and his family name is Green.
写整洁和物品摆放：He is a very tidy boy. His books are in the bookcase, his pens are in the pencil box, and his schoolbag is on the desk.
写家人和爱好：There are four people in his family. He likes playing ping-pong very much.
写补充信息和感受：Peter is very friendly and helpful. He often helps me with my English. I am lucky to have a friend like him.
四、最容易丢分的三个地方
第一是分不清first name 和 family name。题目明确问了名和姓，一定要写出 His first name is... and his family name is...，不能只写一个名字。
第二是物品摆放写得太笼统。题目问Where are his/her school things，要用方位介词具体写出位置，比如 in the bookcase、on the desk、in the pencil box，不能只写 He is tidy。
第三是漏掉补充信息。题目要求Something more about your friend，第三段要写出朋友的性格（friendly, helpful）或你们一起做的事，只写前面的姓名和爱好是不够的。
五、加分小技巧
多用方位介词（in, on, under）写物品摆放，既回答了问题，又展示了词汇量。写爱好和家人时具体一点，比如 likes playing ping-pong，比只写 likes sports 更生动。最后加一句 I am lucky to have a friend like him，显得真诚有感情。全篇用一般现在时，句子简单正确。
六、写完自查
对照检查：名和姓写了吗，是否整洁和物品摆放写了吗，家人和爱好写了吗，补充信息写了吗，词数在80到100之间吗，有没有透露真实姓名。
七年级英语上册期中复习写作专题
七上英语期中复习书面表达专项
