

许多人对高三的印象就是没日没夜地刷题,尤其到了距离高考不到80天的现在,老师和学生一头扎进题海不能自拔,其实不然。
现在的高考命题一直在强调“反套路”,这直接削弱了题海战术的有效性,考的不再是单一的知识点,而是语篇意识、逻辑思维和文化素养。大量盲目刷题本质上是在训练“应试技巧”或“语法规则”,容易导致学生出现高分低能。学生可能背了无数个语言点,却连一个简单地道的句子都造不出来,灵活输出根本无从谈起。
我们知道一张质量上乘的试卷里可供挖掘的有价值的东西很多,比如完形填空就可以作为读后续写的素材库,阅读里的长难句拉出来改造一下就成了语法填空,这种对试题的二次开发和利用才是高三讲解试题的正确打开方式。尤其是高考真题,如果只是简单的重复“做卷子、对答案”,那就是在“浪费资源”。通过各种挖掘和改编,我们可以将这些优质语料“重构价值”,实现“因材施教”的高效备课。
最近我在两套试卷的讲解中,分别从阅读理解和语法填空里提取了两个结构很高级,可以用在写作中的表达方式,利用总结句型和仿句训练的方法,让学生能够在具体语境中吐口而出这些漂亮的句子。



【仿写运用】
1.这本旧书不仅仅是纸张和油墨;它更是奶奶曾给我讲过的童年往事的见证。
The old book is more than just paper and ink; it's a witness to the childhood stories my grandma used to tell me.
2.老巷里的小路不仅仅是木料与石头;它更是邻里间静谧温暖岁月的见证。
The path in the old alley is more than just wood and stone; it's a witness to the quiet, warm years of the neighborhood.
3.桌上的成堆的纸张不仅仅是课本与作业;它更是我们高中时代青春奋斗与梦想的见证。
Piles of paper are more than just textbooks and homework; it's a witness to the youthful struggles and dreams of our high school days.
4.窗边的旧椅子不仅仅是一个工具与支架;它更是我和爷爷一起度过的慵懒午后的见证。
The old chair by the window is more than just a tool and frame; it's a witness to the lazy afternoons I spent with my grandfather.
5.城市里的老火车站不仅仅是砖块与铁轨;它更是无数次离别与重逢的见证。
The old realway station in the city is more than just bricks and tracks; it's a witness to countless departures and reunions.
6.书桌前的旧台灯不仅仅是玻璃与电线;它更是我熬夜备考的见证。
The old lamp at the desk is more than just glass and wire; it's a witness to the late nights I spent preparing for exams.
7.手里的老照片不仅仅是底片与色彩;它更是过去家庭欢聚时刻的见证。
The old photo in my hand is more than just film and color; it's a witness to the happy family gatherings of the past.
8.故乡的老槐树不仅仅是枝丫与绿叶;它更是我童年无忧无虑夏日的见证。
The old locust tree is more than just branches and leaves; it's a witness to the carefree summers of my childhood.


注意这里的to是一个介词。
如果后面是简单的名词短语,直接使用,如果后面是一个有复杂结构修饰的名词,先说名词,再把定语后置。
这个句型可以用于读后续写的结尾升华句,主语一般是一些承载记忆的老物件,即情感载体。
【迁移运用】
之前T8联盟的读后续写 详情请戳
T8联盟读后续写与课文的“亲密接触” 是说承载着主人公美好童年回忆的书店因为社区的改造要拆了,作者很难过,最后经过努力,成功将旧书店改造成了一个集读书和喝咖啡于一体的新型休闲场所。这时我们就可以用这个句型进行升华结尾:
Hopkins' Books is more than just a bookstore; it is a witness to the quiet magic of childhood and the unbroken bond between a community and its stories.



【初级仿写】
1. Unlike the city which is crowded and noisy, the village is quiet and peaceful.2. Unlike the movie that I watched last week, this film has a happy ending.3. Unlike the teacher who is strict with us, our new teacher is very kind.4. Unlike the plan that we made before, this new plan is more practical.5. Unlike the story that he told us, this story is based on real life.
【高级仿写】(来源于历年高考真题)
1. (2021 新高考 I 卷 阅读 D)与基于硬数据的研究不同,这项研究聚焦于个人故事与情感体验。
Unlike the studies that are based on hard data, this research focuses on personal stories and emotional experiences.2. (2020 全国 I 卷 阅读 C)与依赖人力的传统工厂不同,现代工厂高度自动化,所需工人极少。Unlike the traditional factories which rely on manual labor, the modern plants are highly automated and require few workers.3. (2019 全国 II 卷 阅读 B)与满是特效的电影不同,这部影片讲述了一个朴素却动人的亲情故事。Unlike the movies that are full of special effects, this film tells a simple but moving story about family love.4. (2018 全国 III 卷 阅读 D)与人人可自由发帖的社交媒体平台不同,该网站仅允许专业作家发表文章。
Unlike the social media platforms where everyone can post freely, this website only allows professional writers to publish articles.5. (2017 全国 I 卷 阅读 D)与从糖分获取的热量不同,蛋白质带来的热量能增加饱腹感并帮助肌肉合成。
Unlike the calories that we get from sugar, the calories from protein help us feel full and build muscle.6. (2023 新课标 II 卷 阅读 C)与可轻松编辑和分享的电子文本不同,纸质书提供稳定、私密的阅读体验。 Unlike the digital texts which can be easily edited and shared, printed books offer a stable and private reading experience.7. (2022 新高考 I 卷 阅读 B)与易被新潮流吸引的年轻人不同,老年人往往固守旧习惯与生活方式。Unlike the young people who are easily attracted by new trends, the elderly tend to stick to their old habits and lifestyles.8. (2016 全国 II 卷 阅读 C)与专注学术理论的期刊不同,这本杂志涵盖实用生活技巧与趣味故事。Unlike the journals that focus on academic theories, this magazine covers practical tips and interesting stories for daily life.



这个句型强调对比,阅读中常为观点或主旨句。
语法填空中的设空有两种情况,一是在第一个单词unlike那里,它是介词;二就是定语从句的关系词。
【迁移运用】
在上周刚刚进行的第三次模拟考试中,读后续写是说主人公对一个商店里的毛绒玩具心心念念,无奈家境贫穷无法购买,只能每次去看看去摸摸,跟它讲讲心里话。有一天突然发现那个玩具已经不在货架上了......这时我们也可以借鉴这个句型描写主人公的心理:
Unlike the ordinary stuffed animals that lined store shelves, Artie, which had witnessed my quiet fears and secret joys, was far more than just a toy--it was a piece of my soul.

教学启示:不同于普通习题的“用过即弃”,高考真题和优质模拟题的生命力,恰恰藏在教师对其的利用程度里,好好挖掘,用心创编,让学生从“能读懂”到“学会用”,让学生从“被题海里淹没”到“被精准摆渡”,帮他们建立学习英语的信心和热情。



